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Can I Take You There?


Is there something I can say to bring a smile to your face
Is there somewhere we can go, a special hiding place
Where everything you enjoy is abundant and free
If I figure it out would you come with me?
We could run around enlightened by the openness of space
We could lay in silence as I stare at your beautiful face
We could talk by the ocean as the water cools our feet
In this place I could find i...t would be so simple and sweet
We could eat all the foods without a care in the world
We could light a fire and inside the blanket stay curled
We could erase all that ails and weighs heavily on our minds
I'll find a place and everything will be fine
To escape the world's bulk for seconds, minutes, or days
To revive all that's dead inside and attempt to find new ways
To see the beauty life has to offer from everything around
I've got a secret to tell you this place has been found
I can't tell you in this poem because someone might see
This secret is between us just for you and for me
So anticipate the answer and I continue to lure
And be ready for the passion you are about to endure.


This poem was intruiging to me....one cause a child hood friend wrote it....i never new he
had a way with the pen.... and two...because the place the writer is speaking of comes off
as a mysterious island and if he was to take you there all your cares and troubles would
disapear....like moisture on your skin in dry heat......loving his word play in this
one.......much love to you brotha for allowing me to share your thoughts.....

Written by Poetic Playboy


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